高中英语作文读后续写专题指导（心理描写）
高中英语作文读后续写专题指导（心理描写）
应试指导：
1.阅读是续写的基础和前提——What to read
读人物(Who) 读事件(What,Why,How) 读背景(When,Where) 读语言(Style)
2.构思是续写的核心和关键——What to consider
想文章主题想人物交集想故事逻辑
3.行文是续写的落实和产出——What to write 写
人物写故事写思想
步骤：
1.精读文章，把握续写线索
搞清楚何时何地谁发生了何事，事件是如何发展的，为什么会这样发展等问题
2.仔细审题，明了续写要求
2.1关键词
关键词分类：人物类关键词能引领故事的发展，动作类关键词能陈述动作的行为，时间地点类关键词能描述故事场景，事件类关键词能牵引故事情节，形容词类关键词能描述事件特征或人物情感。
关键词对续写内容有一定的导向和限制作用，有助于构思故事的结尾.
2.2续写部分段落首句
仔细研究从第一段提示语我们得知什么，应该考虑接下去写什么，第一段结尾如何呼应第二段开头的提示语，第二段续写时可考虑写什么，第二段结尾如何使故事发展得合情合理。
3.再读原文，构思续写内容
因为续写是对原文的延伸，所以我们续写时要遵循原文的思路和语言风格。为此，考生有必要细读原文，关注原文的主要情节、矛盾的冲突点或高潮处，还要关注原文的语言风格，如细节描写或人物对话等。
4.拟写草稿，丰富语言表达
结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，以及上下文的衔接等。根据故事需要，续写部分需要合理地增加一些次要的情节，比
如人物的表情、动作、心理活动、细节描写等。
读后续写微技能指导I人物内心世界
Part 1 心理及情感描写
I表达情感的单词：
calm concern frighten grateful shock upset confuse regret depressed content astonish curious frown anger yawn delight thrill uncertain exhausted delighted guilty dilemma bored l
oneliness ...
II表达情感变化的词块:
let sb. down
to one’s
regret be ashamed of shed tears of joy what a
pity(shame) be in a good mood laugh one’s head off be clouded with grief
crying one’s heart out
描写人物的英语作文
with eyes full of
horror to one’s
disappointment have
ants in one’s pants
with one’s knees
trembling with a lump
in one’s throat
make one’s hair stand on
end glare at sb. with
burning eyes be wild with
joy(be overjoyed) make sb.
jump out of one’s skin
have butterflies in one’s stomach
be pleased beyond
description(words) burst into
tears (burst out crying)
请将上述短语填入表格适当的位置：
练习1：
light up scare freeze tongue-tie stream down ashamed
选词填空：
1)His face lit up with pleasure.
2)The man next to him was scared to death with death with eyes full of horror.
3)The boy froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
4)The lady’s face turn pale and she stood there tongue-tied.
5)Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
6)She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning/ the blood rushing to her face. Part 2 即时训练：
练习 2 用适当的形式填空：
1.Hearing the news, he got very angry.
Hearing the news, he was filled with
anger.
2.When she knew the result of the test, she felt extremely excited/ joyful/
读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。
thrilled. When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with
excitement/ joy.
3.She broke up with her husband, and she felt extremely sad.
She broke up with her husband, and she was overcome with sadness/ sorrow/grief.
4.Seeing the snake, the boy felt very fearful/ frightened/
scared. Seeing the snake, the boy was full of fear/
fright/ scare.
练习 3 翻译训练:
1.Nervous and worried (既紧张又焦虑), I called my mum and told her what had happened.
2.Much to our shock (让我们吃惊的是), the water level on the road kept rising.
3.A sense of joy and happiness (一阵欣喜的感觉) suddenly went through him.
5.The moment she saw how she did for her science test, tears started welling up (热泪盈眶) in Tina’s eyes and falling down her cheeks.
6.Hearing the news, so desperate (绝望的) was she that she drowned sadness in wine（借酒消愁）.
7.You could imagine the wide smile spreading across Tim’s face. (你可以想象蒂姆笑得多开心。)
8.Marie was nearly paralyzed with fear (吓瘫了) as she stumbled down the road towards them, waving her arms wildly.
练习 4 仿写练习：
1.1. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared.
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.（吓呆了，不敢动弹）At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palm were
sweating.(被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
2.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
When the host announced that she won the prize, she won the prize, she felt thrilled. When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼
放光)
When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
When the host announced that she won the prize, she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自己)
3.一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
Upon hearing the bad news, she , numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying
bitterly. ( 被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
4.她感到非常羞愧。
She felt ashamed.